reading room

[messyman]

Thanks to those who have commented on my first attempt at a story. If you havent read it yet, please cross to the reading room and give me 5 minutes of your time. I welcome comments however critical, I know that some of the previous masterpieces are much better, so any help on improving would be gratefully received.
As to answer 1 question I was asked in a pm, no its not from experience, I have never found 4 women prepared to do that to me.... even if I ask nicely. lol

[Hayley]

Yes, give the Reading Room a go if you haven't already. It has some great stories for all tastes - even Messyman's rather painful ones!

Seriously, there's some horny stuff there.

Hayley

[paulthepieman]

As a fairly regular contributor to the Reading Room I would just like to agree with Hayley and Messyman have said.

There are some really fantastic writers out there and I would advise everyone to have a look it may surprise you.

Also agreeing with Messyman if you have any comments or constructive critisism of any of my stories please feel free to let me know.

The same goes for if you have any ideas of what you would like to see in the stories, I can't guarentee I will use every idea, but something that you mention may trigger something in the dark side of my brain that (tries) to control what I write.

Paul