The Ultimate Obstacle Course - Part 1

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The Ultimate Obstacle Course - Part 1

Postby CustardPie » 03 Aug 2011, 10:21

The start of a short story, I hope you enjoy. Feedback and suggestions are welcomed as always!

Introduction

Tracy looked nervously down at the form, it was a disclaimer for a charity obstacle course but it seemed to be pretty full on. 'The participant agrees that their involvement with the event shows that they agree with the terms of this contract and that they may not commence any legal action for any injury or loss however caused.' She paused.

"Look I don't think I want to sign this?"

S​ue smiled. "Really?" She took the form and signed a passable copy of Tracy's signature at the bottom. "If I am doing this, I am not doing it alone!"
T​racy laughed nervously. She had not been sure about this event from the very moment that Sue had suggested they had taken part, she had heard about the ultimate obstacle course before and the consequences if you took part. It was, without a doubt, the most evil course ever created with multiple traps and pitfalls for the hapless contestant. But the prize was worth winning, £100,000 in cash if you completed the course and they certainly needed the money, student debts loomed over them and the rent was due. She shook her head, there was a chance, all it cost was £10 per person to take part and everyone had a chance to win the prize. Of course you needed more than a chance, in the five years since the start of the competition no body had won the money. The rules said that there was a safe route through the maze, but so far nobody had found it. She had heard the stories about people being trapped for hours some even for days before they could be got free. She shuddered.
S​ue had shuddered at the same thought but for vastly different reasons, she was certainly not looking for a safe path - far from it. Although her flatmate did not know it she was a WAMmer, and the idea of the fiendish traps made her feel positively damp, she just wanted to make sure she got far enough in. She didn't want to fall at some silly little obstacle, she needed to get into the inner sanctum that was where the real traps were, she dreamed of the ultimate WAM experience, and she wanted to be able to share that also so she needed to drag Tracy through the course also. She smiled, this would be quite fun.

***

The two girls stepped from the car and out into the field, later this would be busy but for now it was just the competitors who were arriving for their briefings. The course was in the distance, it loomed huge across at least three fields but the main view was blocked by huge fences. The crowds who would pay to watch the downfall of the racers would do so on large screens. There was the way in, it was a hole in the fence which looked as if it had been torn by some animal.
T​racy sat nervously as they arrived at the briefing point, the group was quiet, nervous. There were only women here, it was the women's race first with the men's to follow next week over an even tougher course. Standing in front of them were three black leather clad bikers, they ran the challenge which had been started as a biker club initiation before they found they could make money out of the race. They had been told that they would be safe, but that they may not escape, if they did get stuck they should stay put and someone may come for them.

T​hen all too soon they were ready to go, Tracy and Sue lined up with other women at the start. There were a number of bikers, tattoed and burly, a group of women from the local roller derby who had worn their costumes and a team of horse riders who were kitted out in white jodhpurs and long black riding boots, there were others there in a variety of costumes and sports wear. Sue had gone and bought two sets of lycra shorts and bra tops in bright red and both her and Tracy were wearing them as they stood on the line.

S​uddenly the gun was fired and they were off there was a scrum as they went through the fence and then the group stopped dead as they saw the wall before them. They had to scale the wall and then on into the maze itself. Sue leapt at the wall, she felt that it had been smeared with thick grease making it almost impossible to climb, she stood back and called to Tracy. "Come on..." She held her hands out and Tracy stepped into them, Sue hoisted her up and she was able to grab the top of the wall. She grasped it and slithered until she was sitting on the top. She reached down and grabbed Sue's hand sliding her up the wall. It was only at the top that they both looked over and saw that the wall was angled away into a huge pool. "Come on..." Sue grabbed Tracy's hand and they slid down into the pool, however the water they expected was not there, it was filled with thick clear slime. They both landed with a splut! Around them they were being joined by others including a roller girl who landed head first in the slime and had to be dragged out by her team mates.

T​he slime was thick and deep and made crossing the pool difficult, it was designed to wear them out before they even started, Sue lay on her front and tried a doggy paddle in the viscus mess. Eventually both of them were at the other side and able to stand up for a moment. Tracy was trying to scrape the slime from her front.

"L​ook don't worry, you are going to be in a mess soon anyway!" Sue laughed. "Which door would you like?"
T​racy looked up for the first time and saw that there were four doors. She shrugged and pointed towards the first door.

"S​ure?" Sue laughed. "Come on..." They ran forward and Sue pushed Tracy through the first doorway. She stumbled and fell into the room, inside there were four chairs and sign saying 'Sit Down'

S​ue and Tracy sat down on two random chairs, at that time two other girls stepped into the room, groaned and sat on the remaining chairs. For a moment nothing happened. Then suddenly the lights went out, there was a scream, the lights came back on and as Sue looked around she saw that there were only three chairs remaining.

"W​hat the hell has happened to the other woman?" Tracy looked around the room in a panic.

"D​on't worry she will come back later." Sue smiled knowing that the roller girl had been plunged into a vat below the floor. When it had happened to her last year she had been dropped into a vat of porridge which had engulfed her and coated every inch of her body. She had to struggle to find a way out which had been below the surface. When she had finally emerged she was a porridge blob which had slowed her down considerably through the rest of the course.
T​his time however they had managed to select safe seats, they stood up quickly. "Come on!" Sue yelled and pushed open one of the two doors in front of them. They plunged into a room where there were already four bikers and two women dressed in wetsuits. There were a series of ropes hanging from the ceiling. There was a sign on the wall which said they had to wait until there were ten people in the room and then they should all take a rope and pull. Tracy and Sue stood under two ropes just as the door opened. Two more women entered the room.

"Okay..." A burly leather clad biked announced. "There are ten of us now." She grabbed for her rope. "One... two... three... Pull!" Everyone pulled their ropes, there was a loud clunk and then silence. Everyone looked around nervously before there was a sudden rush of liquid as four of the rope positions were engulfed in thick grey sludge. One hit a woman next to Sue who leapt out of the way. The flow continued for almost a minute before it stopped. The women looked around and saw four piles of grey mud. There was some movement, but it was clear that the mud was in fact an fast setting cement. It had fallen in such a way that the women set in the rock could breath, but they were truly out of the game.

Tracy grabbed Sue's arm. "Look this is stupid!" She sobbed. "I am not doing this." She reached for the handle of the door they had entered the room through.

"No!" Sue stopped her just in time. "No, you can't go back... That would be even worse!" She shuddered at the thought of women who had been trapped for days by trying to exit. That was just a little too full-on, even for her. "Come on, we had better go."

The next room was empty, the other competitors having moved on already. There were two holes in the wall, leading to slides. One was red and the other blue. ""Okay, what do you think, Red? Sort of matches our outfits or blue?"

"Trust you to go on colour by our costumes!" Sue laughed. "Okay... Your choice, so after you!" Sue pushed Tracy down the slide where she vanished with a scream before leaping down the hole herself. The slide was steep and she felt herself getting faster and faster as she fell. Suddenly she was in a bright room, she landed with a splat before sinking into the floor. Sue looked around, she was in a white gooey mess which was making up the floor. She reached down and tasted it... "Frosting?" She smiled standing up. "This is okay it is just..." Before she could finish she sunk up to her shoulders. "Tracy.. Help me..." Tracy slithered towards her friend grabbing her and pulling her through the hole in the floor. They slipped and slid before lying exhausted on the floor. "Wow... That was close. We had better be careful!" The two women slowly crawled on their hands and knees, just able to keep their faces out of the frosting. Eventually they reached the door and slithered into the next room.
Sue lay flat on her back her lycra costume covered in thick white frosting. Tracy suddenly knelt over her, snarling. "Right you stupid bitch!" Tracy grabbed Sue's hands holding her on the ground. "If we get out of here, I am going to kill you!" She smirked for a moment.

"I am so sorry..." Sue started but Tracy grabbed a handful of frosting and forced it into her mouth.

"Don't be..." She winked. "Don't tell anyone, but I am sort of enjoying this!" She blushed, not that it was visible beneath the frosting on her face."Oh and I can tell you are also." Tracy smoothed her hands over Sue's breasts, it was clear from the hardness of her nipples that this was a major turn-on. "Lets see what we will face next!" Tracy bounded up. "Come on!"

Sue smiled. She had hoped Tracy may enjoy the event, but it could be that she had found another wammer. She slithered to her feet and walked towards the next door.

***

The next room contained the team of horse riders. They were looking slightly less immaculate one of the team was missing (sunk into a swamp of thick clay up to her shoulders) and the others had splattered gunge and mess down their once white jodhpurs and their polished boots were coated in mire. Before there was a giant see-saw, it was obvious that two people had to sit on one side each. Tracy and Sue sat down and two of the remaining equestrians did the same. The see-saw swayed from one way to the other before finally coming to a stop with Tracy and Sue in the air. There was a crack and the other half of the see-saw snapped dropping the horse women into a deep pool which looked to be filled with used engine oil. They gasped and spluttered now covered in black slime from head to toe. Their team mate tried desperately to get them out, grabbing at their slippery limbs.

Tracy turned to help. "No, sorry you can't help the other teams otherwise you will be disqualified." Come on, we get to move on. They pushed through the next door and into another room.

This room seemed to be filled with conveyor belts and machinery. There were four belts to chose from, each wide enough to take a person, they looked as if they went through the wall into the next room. There were also two other women in sports wear. Tracy stepped forward and struggled up onto one of the belts. "Come on Sue, make your choice." Sue did the same and they lay their until the other two women were also on their own belts. Suddenly there was a siren sounding and the belts shuddered into life.

Tracy shrieked as the belt suddenly dragged her forward towards the wall. she was dragged through a small opening and into the next room. There was a rush of liquid and she was covered in a thick, sticky goo before being dragged on through another wall where she was covered with something else which she could not see. The belt ground to a halt and she was able to pull herself from its surface. It took a lot of effort to remove herself as she was effectively glued down with sticky mess. She stood up and looked across the room, there was another belt with a woman shaped blob covered in brightly coloured sprinkles. It was only then that Tracy looked down and saw that she had been covered with a thick layer of chocolate and then hundreds and thousands.

"Tracy is that you?" The blob spoke.

"Sue?" Tracy laughed. "Well you look sweet!" She stepped forward and took a playful bite from Sue's chest, sucking a layer of chocolate from her breast. "Oh and you taste good enough to eat!" The thick chocolate covered the twinkle in her eye as she looked around the room. It was obvious the other belts had not come this way and goodness know what had happened to the other women. Tracy stepped forward and reached for Sue's shorts dragging them down, she was relatively clean beneath the gooey lycra until Tracy smeared handfuls of thick liquid chocolate over her crotch. Sue shuddered as the warm chocolate engulfed her. Tracy smiled before kneeling before her and starting to gently lick the chocolate from her friend.

"Oh wow..." Sue pushed herself into Tracy's face waves of pleasure flooding through her body. It was not long before the feeling of warm chocolate and her friend lapping hungrily at her clit pushed her over the edge into a massive orgasam. She screamed out, grasping Tracy's shoulders for support. "Oh Tracy I never knew..."
Tracy stood up smiling beneath the chocolate. "Sue I didn't think I was that way inclined, but seeing you as a giant chocolate bunny..." She giggled. "I think we had better move on, otherwise this chocolate will set. Sue lunged forward and hugged her friend.

"Perhaps we just stay here and let the chocolate set!" She kissed her deeply.

"Tracy pulled away... All in good time..." She laughed. "We have on hundred grand to win"

***

The two women stepped into another room, there were two showers which they gingerly stepped under and washed off most of the chocolate and sprinkles. "What no trap?" Tracy frowned as she switched off the shower.

"I think not... I think we are being prepared for the next stage of the challenge."

"The next stage?"

"Yes, now it gets a bit more serious!"

"What?" Tracy shrieked. "What the hell do you mean?"

"Well..." Sue smiled. "We run the risk of getting really messy now..."

"Oh..." Tracy followed Sue through into the next room.

***

The room contained about six women, it was obvious that these were the ones who had managed to make it to this level. There was one women in a wetsuit, a biker, the last remaining equestrian, two in cycling outfits from a local club and a woman in tattered evening wear. They nervously looked at each other. It was clear that there was no animosity between them.

A speaker crackled to life above their heads. "Hello ladies... Congratulations you have reached the inner scantum. As you will know the risks become greater but so does the reward for anyone who manages to get through the maze. Good luck... You will need it!" The speaker fell silent.
Sue and Tracy looked nervously at each other. There were a number of doors, slowly the women selected doors and stepped through. The woman in evening wear picked the red door, she walked into a small room, there as a short shriek as she was suddenly engulfed from every direction by paint jets which sprayed her with multi-coloured gloss paint, soon she was a colourful statue unable to move as the quick drying paint set solid. "Wow..." Sue frowned. "I would have picked that door. Come on we can't stay here." They stepped through a random door and found themselves in a room with a boxing ring in the centre, there were the two women wearing lycra cycling suits standing in the middle of the ring.

"Come on then... We want the money and you are not standing in our way!" One of the women snarled. Sue and Tracy clambered into the ring. The four women faced off against each other. There was a message painted on the floor of the ring 'Get your opponent out of the ring and out of the game...'. The first woman slammed into Sue catching her unawares and slamming her into the ropes. Tracy leapt towards the women grabbing the back of her suit, she was grabbed by the second women who pulled her feet away from under of her dropping her heavily onto the canvas floor.

"You nasty bitch!" Tracy screamed grabbing at the women's legs and bringing her down. She had her pinned when there was a sudden splat and she felt herself covered with a thick cold substance. "Ugg... Mud?" The ring was being filled with a deluge of thick clay making grabbing the women almost impossible. They slithered around in the mud.
Sue was fighting the woman on the ropes, the mud was making her footing near impossible she grabbed at the woman's waist and rammed her onto the floor, she slid before knocking her head dazing her for a moment. Sue took her chance and grabbed the woman's lycra shorts and pulled her through the mud towards the edge of the ring.

"Sorry!" The woman shrieked as Sue slid her out of the ring. As she stood up she was caught by a powerful right hook from the woman's partner. Sue dropped to floor writhing in pain. "Ow! That bloody hurt!"

Tracy staggered to her feet, seeing the woman hit Sue made her mad and she ran at the woman slamming her in the small of her back and plunging her into the mud face first. She groaned trying to stand but Tracy was above her, she grabbed her pony-tail and dragged her across the ring. "Say bye bye bitch!" Tracy yanked the woman out of the ring. She landed heavily.

"Thanks Tracy..." Sue stood up slowly and looked over the edge of the ring. She saw the two muddy women struggling below. They had landed in a pool of clear liquid. The sign above the pool stated it was Epoxy Resin.

"What the hell is epoxy resin?" Tracy frowned.

"Glue... Very strong glue. Sue watched as the two women struggled against the thick glue. They were trying to pull their limbs free but were only able to raise them a few inches. Very quickly they gave up and lay panting in the fast setting pool. "Well that could have been us..." Sue shuddered. "Let's get on to the next room."

... To be continued...
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