Hello all,
I was looking around on the web and actually found a story I wrote almost 15 years ago. It was a request from a girlfriend I had who wanted a story about two ladies playing together. Well I was much younger and less experienced than I am now (as the writing and some terms may show) but over all I am happy with the outcome. Re-reading this story I see several spelling and grammatical errors and even a few places I would fix if I ever got the inclination to do so. So what I'm saying is that it is NOT golden prose but I hope you will all find it entertaining nonetheless. All I know is that at the time it made my girlfriend very happy and she really enjoyed the dialogue, oh and the pies.
I can't believe it is still on the Internet!
Enjoy and comments welcomed.
http://www.chocmess.com/stories/Aviar/dogfault.htm
Otif
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You'll find a lot of people lack the time and patience for a story where there aren't any pictures sadly.
Of course,I am not one of these people, only just caught the thread and just read the story. Cheeky and fun, a touch of realism...and oodles of mess.
Me likee made me want to get together with a friend in the kitchen....y'know, just 'cos...
Of course,I am not one of these people, only just caught the thread and just read the story. Cheeky and fun, a touch of realism...and oodles of mess.
Me likee made me want to get together with a friend in the kitchen....y'know, just 'cos...
Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind. Dr Seuss
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Just read your story, Otif, and it's an absolute corker. I enjoy long stories (a fan of LOTR and Discworld - neither of whom have short chapters) and this one held my attention from the first phone call til the last conversation. Well done, Sir. I liked the way the story had structure, and every pie was a seperate event.
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